N¼nNp«³.sWäv B]n A½]psX N«n`n sN«n C«n^n¡p¶p. sbs«¶v A½ dmSv–_qfn Wn¶v C_§n k¶p Mm³ HmXn HanIS A½]psX A`fm^]psX AN¯p B]n^p¶p.NwdnNp«³.sWäv f`]maw N¼n NTNÄ
A½ tN_n k¶p kmSn AX¨p. A½]psX tkgw Fs¶ AÛpSsbXp¯n, H^p N_p¯ hn¡v {dm]pw bmâohv, Wà ioÂDÅ sI^p¸v B\v A½ C«n«pÅSv. ko«n Ft¶mXv hvtWiw fm{Sw Nm\n¨p kr¯n B]n hm^o DXp¯p WX¶ A½]mt\m CsS¶ HmÀ¯p Mm³ AÛpSsb«p.
A½ AknsX C^p¶ kXn FXp¯p KnSn³ tI«sâ tUi¯v AXn¨p.
KnSn³ :””Biv””
A½ : “”bSps¡ N^t]Zm bq_ntfmsW “”
KnSn³ :””Xo¨À, FWn¡v tkUWn¡p¶p “”
A½ :””FXm tbm`]mXn, Wns¶t¸ms` sNmt_ F¶§sa Mm³ FknsX sNm*pk¶p boZn¸n¨p,Wo F´m knIm^nt¨, Wns¶ hpOn¸n¡m³ sNm*pk¶p F¶mt\m, f^ymU¡v fnÊv–s{XÊv F¶v knan¡X””
KnSn³ :””fnÊv–s{XÊv, Fs¶ sk_psS knX\w… ¹ohv “”
A½ :””Wns¶ sk_psS knXm³ AÃ Mm³ FknsX k^p¯n]Sv, Mm³ Npan¡pt¼mÄ Wo Hanªp tWm¡n]Sv Mm³ N*p ssfs^, Wns¶ Mm³ C¶v H^p bmYw bYn¸n¡mw F¶v knIm^n¨Sv “”
KnSn³ :””CWn BkÀ¯n¡nà fnÊv–s{XÊv “”
A½ :””BUyw Wo tWm¡n]SnWp DÅ ln£ S^mw F¶n«tà dm¡n “”
CsSms¡ N*p Fsâ bqän`pw skÅs¸m¡w SpX§n]n^p¶p. A`fm^]n H^p ZnÂtZm C^n¡p¶Sv Mm³ N*p. ASv FXp¯p Mm³ Fsâ bqän N]än. N^]msS C^n¡m³ Mm³ Nãs¸«p. A½ CtS hf]w tX¸v FXp¯p KnSn³ tI«sâ km]n H«n¨p. F¶n«v io sI^p¸v sk¨v tI«sâ Np®]n Ikn«n, tI«³ N^]p¶p*v bs£ lÐw bp_t¯¡p k^p¶nà tX¸v Nm^\w.A½ Nm AknsX Ss¶ sk¨v sM^n¨p.
A½ :””tkUWn¡p¶p*v AtÃXm St]man? “”
KnSn³ tI«³ S` B«n.
A½ Nm FXp¯p,tI«sâ km]ns` tX¸v b_n¨p. tI«sâ N®n Wn¶v skÅw k^p¶p*v. A½ tI«sâ Ip*v I¸n k`n¨p.
A½ :””CSv Wnsâ BUyw AsÃ? “”
KnSn³ :””AsS fnÊvs{XÊv “”
A½ :””Ct¸mjs¯¡v C{S]pw fSn
ASpw b_ªp tI«sâ N¿ns` N]À Ajn¨p.
A½ :””k¶p sdZn NnX¡X “”
A½ tI«sâ Np® N¿n FXp¯p H^p D½ sNmXp¯p. A{S]pw Ikn«n]n«pw ASv ko*pw N¼n]m]n. tI«³ hpOw sNm*v N®X¨v NnX¶p.
A½ : “”C¶v Wnsâ ho Mm³ sbm«n¨p S^mw “”
ASpw b_ªp Np® FXp¯p Du¼n. BUyw N¼nNp«³.sWäv
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sunitha pinne ennayum kuzhambum theche uzhine amma kalyanide naduvedhana matti koduthathe ippozhathe pilllerde oru karyam nalla ammayi mmare ane nottam hooo enthokeya avar thante aammayil avar katti kootiyath, paksha kai niraya pannam kitti ellam nalla panachakukalude makaal ane. anjane oru dhivasum shaji de adutha oru dhosthaya kumarettan kalyanide dutha pattepadikara ane oru dhivasan pannal kazhine avar thalarne kidakumbol kumarettan paranju ,shaji oru anadhanane avan ninjal ke oru ann thuna akum nalla payanane anjane kumarettan shaji yode samsarichu sunitha yum kalyaniyum pezha kal ane ennal sujitha kochu nalla swabavam aneda mone ninake cherum pinne idakke njan angottu varumtta nee onne kannadachekanam athe samathichu mattavar rendumenjane kazhinalum ennike onnum illa enike sujithaye mathi chetta ummm chekane poothi kayari nilkanale shaji chirichu anjane avarude vivaham kazhinu a veetl oru murriye ullu pinne oru irrayam agavum ane sujithayum shajiyum a mooriyil maniyara orunji inni avar a muri eduthotte kalyani yum sunitha yum theeerumanichu anne kumaran avide ninju rathri sunitha makaal de koode kidanu rathri ezhunetta sunitha kandathe janal azhiyil pidiche kundhiche nilkunna kalyani ye ann pannuna kumarettane ane rande perkum udu thuniyilla kumarettane vedi pottu nathe munpe kalyani ke vedipotti virachu a ammayi charakke onnu pidanju kummarettante pari asanathil ninne uri ponnu a nimishathil kumarettane vedipottti paal chetti kalyani ye pacha theri villiche thekatha bhitthiyilke aann pathichu or ettukali a bhithiyile undayirunu pari paalil ottipoyi sunitha kannum mizhiche ithe kande kiddanu aval de manasil appol maniyarayilthe karyam ayirunu….kadha thudaru comments venam…..
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