N¼nNp«³.sWäv ASnsâ fpNan fm{Sw A½ Du¼n, bns¶ ASv fpjpk³ A½ km]n FXp¯p, ASpw GNtUlw H^p 8 C©v Woaw DÅ N_p¯ Np®. C{S]pw B]t¸mtj¡pw FWn¡v 2 Sk\ tbm]n.NwdnNp«³.sWäv bs£ ZnÂtZm bqän Wn¶v FXp¡m³ tSm¶n]nÃ.
A½ tI«tWmXv A½]psX bqÀ W¡m³ b_ªp tI«sâ fpOt¯¡v C^p¶p.
A½ :””Wm¡v ANt¯¡v C«p k`n¨p W¡n kXns¡Xm Fsâ bqÀ….ABiv At½…. Wnsâ Wm¡p sNmÅmftÃmZm bq_n tfmsW “”
A§sW Np_¨p Njnªp A½ tI«sâ S` bqänt`¡v tIÀ¯v sk¨v A½ knÃv tbms` kaªp
A½ :””BBiv–….. WnÀ¯msS W¡n SmXm….. At¿m Mm³ Ct¸mÄ hzÀPw Nm\pw “”
A½¡v k¶p F¶v FWn¡v fWÊn`m]n.
A½ :””k¶p b®n SmXm St]man “”
KnSn³ :””sNmS¯n N]äns¡ms« fnÊvs{XÊv? “”
A½ :”” BUyw bqän b®n bXns¡Xm b«n.””
KnSn³ tI«³ A½]psX bqän`pw tI«sâ Np®]n`pw Sp¸Â tS¨p. bSns] A½]psX bqän Np® D_¨p.
A½ :””C«p D^¡msS f^ymU¡v tNäXm.””
tI«³ Hä SÅv k¨p sNmXp¯p.Np® N]_n tbm]n
A½ :””ABiv A§sW Bªp AXns¡Xm…. CWn F¶pw ^m{Sn Wnsâ Np® Fsâ bqän FWn¡v Nn«\w….b®nsNmsÃXm St]man…..Mm³ Cs¸m ImNpw “”
tI«³ :””F¶pw k¶p b®nt¡mamw fnÊvs{XÊv “”
A½ :””C¶v fpSÂ Wo Fsâ AXnf Bs\Xm…AXns¡Xm St]man “”
A½ KnSn³ tI«sW SÅn Smsj C«p, fpNan tN_n C^p¶p sbmSn¡m³ SpX§n. Mm³ Ct¸mjpw ZnÂtZm bqän`pw sk¨v Wn¡pN]m\v.
KnSn³ :””FWn¡v k^m_m]n fnÊv–s{XÊv “”
A½ :””Hjns¡Xm Fsâ bqän Wnsâ Np® bm “”
tI«³ Wn¶p kn_¨p…. skÅw tbm]n F¶v fWÊn`m]n…. A½ tI«tWmXv {ZÊv– sI¿m³ b_ªp.
FÃmw Njnªp A½ tI«sâ fpO¯v Bªp H^p AXn sNmXp¯p.
A½ :””bq_n tfmsW CSv H^p SpX¡w fm{Sfm\v…. CknsX WX¶Sv Bt^msX¦n`pw b_ªm Wns¶ Mm³ sNm¶pNa]pw… fWÊn`mt]mXm? “”
KnSn³ :””B]n fnÊvs{XÊv “”
A½ :””C_§n tbmXm St]man “”
A½ tI«³ tbm]t¸mÄ kmSn bq«m³ tbm] S¡Sn¶p Mm³ tkPw Fsâ _qfnt`¡v– tbm]n.NwdnNp«³.sWäv At¸mjpw Fsâ Nmfw sN«X§n]nÃ. Ft¸mtjm Mm³ D_§n tbm]n.
bntä¶v A½ Ft¶mXv b*s¯ tbms` Ss¶ sb^pfm_n. bs£ FWn¡v A½s] CWn b*s¯tbms`Nm\m³Njn]pfm]n^p¶nÃ.F¶m`pwFsâknNm^§saDÅnÂMm³HSp¡nbnXn¨p.
CãwBs]¦nÂAXp¯bmÀ«v–FjpSmw.
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മോൾക്ക് 18 വയസ്സ് തികഞ്ഞു എന്നിട്ട് രംഗത്ത് ഇറക്കിയാൽ മതി എന്ന അഭിപ്രായം ഉണ്ട്.
sunitha pinne ennayum kuzhambum theche uzhine amma kalyanide naduvedhana matti koduthathe ippozhathe pilllerde oru karyam nalla ammayi mmare ane nottam hooo enthokeya avar thante aammayil avar katti kootiyath, paksha kai niraya pannam kitti ellam nalla panachakukalude makaal ane. anjane oru dhivasum shaji de adutha oru dhosthaya kumarettan kalyanide dutha pattepadikara ane oru dhivasan pannal kazhine avar thalarne kidakumbol kumarettan paranju ,shaji oru anadhanane avan ninjal ke oru ann thuna akum nalla payanane anjane kumarettan shaji yode samsarichu sunitha yum kalyaniyum pezha kal ane ennal sujitha kochu nalla swabavam aneda mone ninake cherum pinne idakke njan angottu varumtta nee onne kannadachekanam athe samathichu mattavar rendumenjane kazhinalum ennike onnum illa enike sujithaye mathi chetta ummm chekane poothi kayari nilkanale shaji chirichu anjane avarude vivaham kazhinu a veetl oru murriye ullu pinne oru irrayam agavum ane sujithayum shajiyum a mooriyil maniyara orunji inni avar a muri eduthotte kalyani yum sunitha yum theeerumanichu anne kumaran avide ninju rathri sunitha makaal de koode kidanu rathri ezhunetta sunitha kandathe janal azhiyil pidiche kundhiche nilkunna kalyani ye ann pannuna kumarettane ane rande perkum udu thuniyilla kumarettane vedi pottu nathe munpe kalyani ke vedipotti virachu a ammayi charakke onnu pidanju kummarettante pari asanathil ninne uri ponnu a nimishathil kumarettane vedipottti paal chetti kalyani ye pacha theri villiche thekatha bhitthiyilke aann pathichu or ettukali a bhithiyile undayirunu pari paalil ottipoyi sunitha kannum mizhiche ithe kande kiddanu aval de manasil appol maniyarayilthe karyam ayirunu….kadha thudaru comments venam…..
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