ലീവ് ഡെയ്‌സ്
Leave Days | Author : Mandhan Raja
കോൾ കട്ടായതും ഹരി സ്തംഭിച്ചിരുന്നു പോയി ..
അമ്മ ..അമ്മയെന്താണ് പറഞ്ഞത് ?
അവനാ വാക്കുകൾ ഉൾക്കൊള്ളാൻ ആയില്ല .
ഹരിയുടെ മുഖത്ത് വെളിച്ചം തീരെയില്ലാത്തത് കണ്ട്
സണ്ണി അവന്റെയടുത്തേക്ക് വന്നു . കൂടെ ഷാബിനും .
“‘ എന്നാടാ ..എന്നാടാ ഹരീ .. അമ്മ ഞങ്ങള് വരണ്ടാന്നു പറഞ്ഞോ ..സാരമില്ല .നീ വിട്ടോ നാട്ടിലേക്ക് , അതോർത്തു നീ ടെൻഷനടിക്കണ്ട .ഞാനിവിടെ വീട്ടിൽ നിന്നോളാടാ ”’
”’ഹേയ് അതൊന്നുമല്ല..”’
ഹരി ചിരിക്കാൻ ശ്രമിച്ചു.
”” ഞാൻറൂമിലേക്ക് പോകുവാ. നിങ്ങൾ ക്‌ളാസ് കഴിഞ്ഞു പോരെ..
ഹരി കാറിൽ നിന്ന് ബാഗ് എടുത്തു.
””ഡാ..എന്ത് പറ്റി നിനക്ക്.. ഞങ്ങളും വരാം.. ”’
ഷാബിൻ അവന്റെ കയ്യിൽ പിടിച്ചു.
”’ഷാബി.. അവൻ പോട്ടെ.. നമുക്ക് വൈകിട്ട് പിടിക്കാം അവനെ.. ഡാ ഹരീ നീ വണ്ടിയെടുത്തോ ഞങ്ങൾ ഓട്ടോക്ക് വന്നോളാം.”’
സണ്ണി അവന്റെ കയ്യിലേക്ക് കീ കൊടുത്തിട്ട് കാറിന്റെ ഡോർ തുറന്നു ബാഗ് എടുത്തു
Bakki ille
Waiting for the second part of Sreeja Kanda lock down
പ്രിയ രാജാവേ ഒരു അഭ്യർത്ഥന മാത്രമേ ഉള്ളൂ. താങ്കൾ എഴുതി പകുതിയിൽ നിർത്തിയ കഥകൾ പൂർത്തിയാക്കിയതിനു ശേഷം മാത്രം പുതിയ കഥകൾ തുടങ്ങുക
എവിടാണ് രാജാവേ
ഇതിന്റെ ബാക്കി വരുമോ
ബാക്കി ഭാഗം ഇത് വരെ പൂര്‍ത്തി ആയില്ലേ
കട്ട waitting ആണ്‌ ആയതു എങ്കിലും ഇട് plz
Ini ee story continuation undavenn thonnunnila moopark covid positive aanenn ketu IPO entha avastha enn ariyila
ഫ്രസ്‌ട്രെഷൻ മനുഷ്യരെകൊണ്ട് എന്തെല്ലാം പറയിക്കും.. അല്ലെ?
It’s not frustration get your facts correct and then speak.One author named Smitha has told in her comment box that mandhan raja is suffering from covid and I just said that here
Was it? Didn’t know that, pardon. And I said you’re frustrated because of the begging you did in your previous comments. So not taking that back. Have a good day!
താങ്കളുടെ കുറെ കഥകൾ ഇടയ്ക്കുവെച്ചു നിന്നുപോയിട്ടുണ്ടല്ലോ രാജാ.. ഓരോന്നായി പുനരാരംഭിച്ചുകൂടെ
Where did I beg I have been following this author for a long time and I have been an ardent fan of his writing and he promised that he will publish the next part of this story within two weeks and he broke that promise and as a fan of this author atleast I have the guts to talk to him and let him know that we have been waiting for the second part, and Iam surely not like you who comes here daily and read the comments and let others talk to him and make him publish the second part, and mainly I didn’t have time for these type of stupid arguments have a good day
Dude, don’t you have a freaking brain? Asking someone to do something and begging for doing something is different. You just go through other peoples comments here, they are just asking the author to give the second part but you are not like that, you’re are like begging by licking his shoes by saying comments like, “oh please.. Give the second part” and “if someone knows this person please ask him to complete the story” and “oh.. Everyone is betraying us..” etc. These were your comments sir and you call this not begging, Pathetic.
And you said something about me coming here daily and letting others speak, well Mister, I’ve seen some people asking for the second part in a gentle manner and people like you begging for it, what I think about this is, the author is the one who has to take a dicison whether to give the second part or not, and we are no one to compell him. This is a totally free to come and leave platform. So I’m no one to ask him to publish the second part. That’s why I never leave a comment. But when I see the Beggings you people do it’s hard not to leave a comment.
Are you really dump or are you acting dump I know what situation he is going through that’s why I said that he is covid positive and I’m not sure whether the second part will come or not and I already told you many times that I didn’t have time for these type of arguments with a you
Hey mister did you know that this story is supposed to be a continuation story or a 3 or 4 part series so it’s the duty of the author to complete this story and if he can’t complete that then he shouldn’t have write the first part and simply disappear like this and I know that this is a free platform so it’s my choice to say what ever I want and did I ever ask you anything. I just asked the author to complete this story and in his comment box and not on yours so my question is who are you to judge me and mainly I already told you that I didn’t have time for this stupid bullshit crap conversations with you so please shut the fuck up and leave me
I think now you got the begging part. Now the rest..
Dude just don’t take anything for granted. Even if the author said the second part will come soon, and he failed to do so, who the hell are you to judge him by saying if he can’t complete a story he shouldn’t have written it in the first place. Dude he is not your servant or anything, he is doing this for free, and you here judging him saying he shouldn’t have written it if he can’t complete. Dude you never know what situation a person is handling. What if he is now in a worst situation, and you are here without caring about anything and complaining like a little child,”Oh the author betrayed me”. What a narrow mind you have there!I really feel sorry for you bro.
And secondly there is a thing called ethics whether you are writing it for free or not and I’m really not interested to make you realize that so bye
And who the hell are you to judge me by saying that I’m begging or crying how many times did I need to tell you that I’m not interested in this argument with you are you really dump or what
And I already understand what he is going through that’s why I told the other guy that the author has been tested covid positive so why don’t shut this crap
What ethics are you speaking here you frustrated Begging kid? You are not ready to understand what the person near to you is feeling. You are all about ‘what am I gonna get in this?’attitude. Dude that’s so pathetic.
Oh, that’s cool you can judge even the author But I can’t judge you, dude you terribly need some medical attention.
And in one of your previous comments to the author, you literally wrote that you are begging to him, and in one of your replays to me you said “when did I beg?”
Dude what are you, some mental shitbag?
You know what you are just a piece of shit who is just sitting in a fallacy and secondly I have nothing to prove to you because you are simply an ass sucking leech who doesn’t have an opinion of his own and one more thing you are the one who started this fucking ugly conversation because you came in between me and some other guy and started talking shit and why don’t you go do some other shit other than this because I have seriously told you that I’m not at all interested in this fucking argument and you just barks like it’s something which excites you the most because that’s what you only know just bark bark and bark you fucking piece of shit and this is the last comment I’m typing to you because I didn’t have time for this bullshit
Oh, in a place where everyone wears a mask, realising that no one will find his true identity, the frustrated Begging asshole is getting more frustrated. Oh boy, what a fun to watch!🤭
And I’m really looking forward seeing you begging on someone’s comment box and I must say you’re a master in it.
Adiós Bitch.
And one more thing, you just did what everyone does when they lose in arguments, which is getting angry and using words they call there close ones.
Since you are afraid to replay to my points I feel that you’re a coward who only knows to beg.
Again feeling damn sorry for you.
Hey what’s your situation now are you ok?
This is the worst kind of attitude I have ever seen from an author or writer
Edo valathum nadako
Ee story full aakan patilenki atleast idhuvare eshuthiyathenkilum onnu upload Cheyu bro
Aashaneee???
Any updates idh IPO correct Oru maasam aayi raajave
Ee manushyanumaayi aarenkilum contact undenki dhayav cheyth ee story onnu complete aakan parayanam