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jack • 20-09-2026 14:23

ithanu prashnam...oru katha thudangum ath pathi vazhiyil itt mungum...pinne adutha katahyumayi varum...athum finish cheyyilla....veendum puthiyathumayi varum....suahara thnne mathi....athil ee paranja chila mattangal varuthi continue cheythal mathi....
ingne katha complete cheyyan kazhiyunnillenki pinne enthinanu ezhuthunnath ? nirthi pokkolooo athanu ithilum nallath.

From: Chapter 2

GhostRiter • 20-09-2026 22:14

😂
come on bro. njaan parayunnath brok manasilakunnilla. ee seriesinte thudakkathil thanne njaan paranjirunnu ith adithyante lifeil varunna pala sambhavangal anu ennu. Suhara athil oru part matram anu.adutha chapteril chilappo vere character arikkum.athinte ardham njaan kadha nirthi vere thudangi ennano bro? ee siteil thanne angane pala angelil koodi pokunna etra stories und? suhara+adithyan matram aayal njaan udesikkunna kadha avilla ennan njaan paranjath.bro paranja point interesting aayi thonni,ath kond ath bavyil oru spin off akkan pattumo ennu nokkam ennan njaan udesichath.

From: Chapter 2

Dreamer • 20-09-2026 06:02

Continue man. Mini chechi and amma lesbian kali undenn mon arinjal super. Pinne mini chechi koode oru kali, matte kadayile chechi koode oru kali. Suharante koode eni kali eyuthanda enna ente oru idh.

From: Chapter 2

GhostRiter • 20-09-2026 22:16

Adithyante amma ulppetta oru kali undakilla bro.Aa characterin angane oru side kodukkan plan illa.Bakki ellam namuk nokkam.Suhara ini kurach nalathek venda ennanu entem manasil.Thanks for support ❤️

From: Chapter 2

jack • 20-09-2026 00:56

hello nee thanne ezhuthanam...ninte ith vareyulla ezhuthu kidilan anu....suahara ithinu pattiya aal anu.
athilekk ee thread koodi cherthal mathi....ippo thnne ninte kathayil suhara poli anu...ith koodi chernnal katha kidu avum...
pazhaya school teacher punishments.tuition teacher pole  allenki neighbour aunty strict behaviour okke pole bhavanayil kandal mathi.
anusaranakked ishtappedatha boysine nalla kuttiyayi kanan agraham ulla oru sthree.......suhara ippo thanne avane eda poda adi veno ennokke vilikkunna scenekal kathayil und.ath onnu koodi expand cheythal mathi.nee ezhuthanam.
sadharana nammal veettilum schoolilum okke kanunna strict parent teacher character aanith....vegam thudangiko...ninte suharayum adiyum ithiunu pattiya alkkar anu....

jack • 20-09-2026 00:36

hello nee thanne ezhuthanam...ninte ith vareyulla ezhuthu kidilan anu....suahara ithinu pattiya aal anu.
athilekk ee thread koodi cherthal mathi....ippo thnne ninte kathayil suhara poli anu...ith koodi chernnal katha kidu avum...
pazhaya school teacher punishments.tuition teacher pole  allenki neighbour aunty strict behaviour okke pole bhavanayil kandal mathi.
anusaranakked ishtappedatha boysine nalla kuttiyayi kanan agraham ulla oru sthree.......suhara ippo thanne avane eda poda adi veno ennokke vilikkunna scenekal kathayil und.ath onnu koodi expand cheythal mathi.nee ezhuthanam.
sadharana nammal veettilum schoolilum okke kanunna strict parent teacher character aanith....vegam thudangiko...ninte suharayum adiyum ithiunu pattiya alkkar anu....

From: Chapter 2

GhostRiter • 20-09-2026 13:04

alochikkam bro, enthayalum Suhara ee chapterodu koodi oru break edukkua :p
Future lineupil evdelum scope vannal cheyyam

From: Chapter 2

jack • 19-09-2026 22:24

ith nee thnne ezhuthanam....ninte suhara adipoli anu....suaharaye kond thnne ithokke cheyyikkanam....nee ippo zehuthiyath thnne mikcha bhavana anu....ath pole ithangu ezhuthiyal mathi...verum kali mathram akumpo suhara poraa...suahara yude character thnne vere level akanam...ninakk pattum...nee ithrayum ezhithyath vech ith ninakk thnne ezhutham...ippo ulla suharayude veedum aa payyante chuttupadukalum ellam o nu koodi expand cheyth ee thread athilek koottiyal mathi.nammude veettil schoolil techers nte polathe punishment discipline cherthal mathi.vegam thudangikko.

From: Chapter 2

jack • 19-09-2026 13:39

yes thudaranam....ith katha onnu koodi develop cheyyanam....kurachu dominancy add cheyyanam....suhara strict dominant discipline character akanam....adithyan ou young ayath kond avane aval nannayi control cheyyanam.suhara bahyankara bold authoritarian akanam...avane discipline cheyyanam...punishments kodukkanam...avante kuruthakedukal kandethi shikshikkanam...suahraye avanu nalla pedi undakanam...ini ano eluppam kali kodukkaruth...kali eppo venam ennu suhara theerumanikkanam...avan kali kittan kothi koodi pedichu nadakkanam...avante padanathilum mattu karyangalilum ellam suharra idapedanam...deshyappedanam...nalla punishment scenekal cherkkanam...chooral adi scenekal...pinne chevi pidutham nullu....avanu suhara ou teachere pole ummaye pole shikshichu avante dusheelanagal matti edukkanam....avanodu nalla sneham undakanam....romance undakanam ...upadeshikkanam....pakshe strict character main akanam...oro kuttangalkkum adi kodukkanam...nalla vadiyum chooralumokke undakanam...avan ingne ayal pattilla ...nannakki edukanam ennu suhara theerumanikkanam....ithinidaykk chila romantic love avanu kodukkukayum venam...avane paramavadhi kambi adippichu kothippichu nadathiyitt suaharakk thonnumpo kali kodukkanam....                                             (suhara ini pazhaya pole chiriyum kaliyum avaruth...boysine nannayi kaikaryam cheyyunna shikshikkunna oru .strict gaurdian teacher disciplinarian dheshyakkari avatte.)

From: Chapter 1

GhostRiter • 19-09-2026 19:09

Oh bro vere level review. Pakshe ithonnum ente bavanayil varunna item alla bro 😁
Broku thanne ee thread oru kadha ayit develop cheyth koode? adipli arikkum ❤️

From: Chapter 1

jack • 19-09-2026 13:21

yes thudaranam....ith katha onnu koodi develop cheyyanam....kurachu dominancy add cheyyanam....suhara strict dominant discipline character akanam....adithyan ou young ayath kond avane aval nannayi control cheyyanam.suhara bahyankara bold authoritarian akanam...avane discipline cheyyanam...punishments kodukkanam...avante kuruthakedukal kandethi shikshikkanam...suahraye avanu nalla pedi undakanam...ini ano eluppam kali kodukkaruth...kali eppo venam ennu suhara theerumanikkanam...avan kali kittan kothi koodi pedichu nadakkanam...avante padanathilum mattu karyangalilum ellam suharra idapedanam...deshyappedanam...nalla punishment scenekal cherkkanam...chooral adi scenekal...pinne chevi pidutham nullu....avanu suhara ou teachere pole ummaye pole shikshichu avante dusheelanagal matti edukkanam....avanodu nalla sneham undakanam....romance undakanam ...upadeshikkanam....pakshe strict character main akanam...oro kuttangalkkum adi kodukkanam...nalla vadiyum chooralumokke undakanam...avan ingne ayal pattilla ...nannakki edukanam ennu suhara theerumanikkanam....ithinidaykk chila romantic love avanu kodukkukayum venam...avane paramavadhi kambi adippichu kothippichu nadathiyitt suaharakk thonnumpo kali kodukkanam.... amma avane suharaye elppikkanam.(suhara ini pazhaya pole chiriyum kaliyum avaruth...boysine nannayi kaikaryam cheyyunna shikshikkunna oru .strict gaurdian disciplinarian dheshyakkari avatte.)

From: Chapter 2

GhostRiter • 19-09-2026 19:24

Oh bro vere level review. Pakshe ithonnum ente bavanayil varunna item alla bro 😁
Broku thanne ee thread oru kadha ayit develop cheyth koode? adipli arikkum ❤️

From: Chapter 2

Guest Reader • 19-09-2026 11:24

Yes please continue.page kutti ezhuthu waiting Next part

From: Chapter 2

GhostRiter • 19-09-2026 19:09

Sure.will try ❤️

From: Chapter 2

Zayn x • 19-09-2026 08:12

വളരെ പെട്ടെന്ന് തീർന്നുപോയി വായിച്ചെന്ന് പോലും തോന്നിയില്ല അടുത്തവട്ടം കുറച്ചുകൂടെ പേജ് കൂട്ടി എഴുതാൻ ശ്രമിക്കണം

From: Chapter 2

GhostRiter • 19-09-2026 15:15

sure bro will try ❤️

From: Chapter 2

Razor • 19-09-2026 05:11

Bro ith vare engane ethinn koode parai next partil

From: Chapter 2

GhostRiter • 19-09-2026 19:10

Bro please read chapter 1❤️

From: Chapter 2

Aju • 19-09-2026 01:58

Bro ith oru female domination story aakkiyal kollam

From: Chapter 2

GhostRiter • 19-09-2026 19:11

Ath main character ayi set akilla bro. Adithyan is not a subduing type. But thanks for the feedback ❤️

From: Chapter 2

jack • 18-09-2026 22:36

yes thudaranam....ith katha onnu koodi develop cheyyanam....kurachu dominancy add cheyyanam....suhara strict dominant discipline character akanam....adithyan ou young ayath kond avane aval nannayi control cheyyanam.suhara bahyankara bold authoritarian akanam...avane discipline cheyyanam...punishments kodukkanam...avante kuruthakedukal kandethi shikshikkanam...suahraye avanu nalla pedi undakanam...ini ano eluppam kali kodukkaruth...kali eppo venam ennu suhara theerumanikkanam...avan kali kittan kothi koodi pedichu nadakkanam...avante padanathilum mattu karyangalilum ellam suharra idapedanam...deshyappedanam...nalla punishment scenekal cherkkanam...chooral adi scenekal...pinne chevi pidutham nullu....avanu suhara ou teachere pole ummaye pole shikshichu avante dusheelanagal matti edukkanam....avanodu nalla sneham undakanam....romance undakanam ...upadeshikkanam....pakshe strict character main akanam...oro kuttangalkkum adi kodukkanam...nalla vadiyum chooralumokke undakanam...avan ingne ayal pattilla ...nannakki edukanam ennu suhara theerumanikkanam....ithinidaykk chila romantic love avanu kodukkukayum venam...avane paramavadhi kambi adippichu kothippichu nadathiyitt suaharakk thonnumpo kali kodukkanam....                                             (suhara ini pazhaya pole chiriyum kaliyum avaruth...boysine nannayi kaikaryam cheyyunna shikshikkunna oru .strict gaurdian teacher disciplinarian dheshyakkari avatte.)

From: Chapter 2

GhostRiter • 19-09-2026 19:25

Oh bro vere level review. Pakshe ithonnum ente bavanayil varunna item alla bro 😁
Broku thanne ee thread oru kadha ayit develop cheyth koode? adipoli arikkum ❤️

From: Chapter 2

Vampire Amal • 18-09-2026 09:55

Pls continue, but next time pls add more pages and pics please.....

From: Chapter 2

GhostRiter • 18-09-2026 13:54

Pics are hard bro, njaan udesikkunna pole onnum alla ai tharunnath. Will definitely increase the pages

From: Chapter 2

Jin • 18-09-2026 07:44

തീർച്ചയായും തുടരണം ഇത്തരം കഥകൾ വളരെ രസകരമാണ്

From: Chapter 2

GhostRiter • 18-09-2026 13:54

Thanks ❤️

From: Chapter 2

Lucky • 18-09-2026 06:01

നന്നായിട്ടുണ്ട് bro please continue

From: Chapter 2

GhostRiter • 18-09-2026 13:54

sure ❤️ thanks

From: Chapter 2

രാജീവ്‌ • 05-09-2026 08:10

ഒരു ലോജിക്കൊക്കെ വേണ്ടേ ബ്രോ 😆

From: Chapter 1

GhostRiter • 06-09-2026 11:44

കമ്പി കഥയിൽ ലോജിക്കോ? 🤔
എന്നാലും ഏതു ഭാഗത്തു ആണ് ലോജിക് ഇഷ്യൂ എന്നറിയാൻ താല്പര്യം ഉണ്ട്. Plz tell.
ഭാവിയിൽ ഉപകരിക്കുമോ എന്ന് നോക്കാം.

From: Chapter 1

Binoop • 05-09-2026 07:23

🔥🔥🔥

From: Chapter 1

GhostRiter • 06-09-2026 11:44

❤️❤️

From: Chapter 1

ബിജീഷ് • 03-09-2026 16:21

തുടക്കം സുഹറ ആണോ റസിയയാണോ 🙏

From: Chapter 1

GhostRiter • 03-09-2026 22:46

ഒരു കൈ അബദ്ധം😁

From: Chapter 1

Ajay • 03-09-2026 15:54

Uff.. polichu monee..
Kidilam

GhostRiter • 03-09-2026 23:14

Thank you ❤️

Zayn x • 03-09-2026 11:28

അടിപൊളി👌 ഇപ്പോൾ ഇങ്ങനെയുള്ള കഥ കിട്ടാൻ വലിയ പാടാ എന്തായാലും ഇനിയും പാർട്ടികൾ പോരട്ടെ❤️

From: Chapter 1

GhostRiter • 03-09-2026 23:13

Thank you ❤️
പാർട്ടുകൾ വരുന്നത് ആയിരിക്കും.

From: Chapter 1