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പൊന്നു.? • 2020-06-24 13:37

Kollaam.......

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Darklord • 2017-10-16 20:28

A spoilt story...I could have made it good by better dialogue and situations..u were too fast..realism is not even close....and more over it resembles another story in the same site which was complete in 4/5 parts and in fairly decent way...but pls write new but show us improvemen....

unni • 2017-10-16 20:27

Bakki ezhuthu bro

Sanu • 2017-10-16 11:45

Thudaruuuu

Sushama • 2017-10-16 07:05

Super

Shibu • 2017-10-16 01:38

Kollam