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Aswathi • 2024-01-14 17:47

Njan ipo aduth vayichathil ettavum ishtapetta story

Vasu • 2024-01-03 11:00

Ee kadha njan complete cheythu post cheyyanamengil ariyikkuga ?

The Sword • 2024-01-06 15:45

Complete the story bro

YUBAN • 2024-01-09 22:10

Pls do it Vasu

arun • 2024-01-11 15:13

Bring it on bro???

YUBAN • 2024-01-02 21:45

Plz write the rest njan kalu pidikam

Ravi • 2023-12-02 22:09

Oru mairan negative comment ittu ennu karuthi ezuthathe irikkaruth pls cimplete it. The story is???

Xx • 2023-10-25 15:21

❤️❤️❤️?

YUBAN • 2023-10-13 21:57

Pls write

Sasi • 2023-07-11 21:46

This is yourkgf and bahubali so dont leave it unfinished

YUBAN • 2023-07-05 15:57

PLSCOMPELTETHISMASTERPIECE

Sasi • 2023-06-28 16:56

Dayav cheythu baaki ezuthoo

arun • 2023-06-14 21:40

Pls write

Sasi • 2023-06-10 21:09

Pls write

Sree • 2023-03-20 21:31

നിങ്ങൾ ദയവു ചെയ്തു ബാക്കിയെഴുതണം. ഇതൊരു അപേക്ഷയാണ്

Uma • 2023-01-21 21:21

If you are alive plz complete the masterpiece

arun • 2023-01-10 14:48

plzcomplete

Uma • 2022-12-07 22:19

I am waiting for part5

The Sword • 2024-01-06 15:47

Complete the part and post

Uma • 2022-12-01 22:06

പ്ലസ് കമ്പൽട്ട the classic

Ertyu • 2022-11-22 22:11

I am begging please complete the story

Tuio • 2022-11-11 22:20

നിങ്ങളുടെ കാലു പിടിക്കാം ദയവുചെയ്ത് ബാക്കിയെഴുതു.

Frankie • 2022-10-17 15:25

സെയിം author rashida എന്ന പേരിൽ 3 കഥകൾ എഴുതീട്ടുണ്ട് CMNF/ENF തീം വച്ച് ഉള്ള സ്റ്റോറീസ് തന്നെ ആണ്. വേറെയും alias ഈ authorinu ഉണ്ടെങ്കിൽ മെൻഷൻ ചെയ്യുക

Uma • 2022-10-14 14:06

You have time till this year end otherwise I will complete the story

Kallu • 2022-10-14 20:50

Please complete the story. You can use an alternative universe kind of setting for part 5 so that when abhirami comes, she can finish her own version as well

Abi • 2022-12-02 19:17

Pls complete this story.. Kayachittu vayya

Angitha • 2023-01-27 21:01

Plz.. Do it