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snigda • 2016-06-03 23:02

Nice one .now I feel good

anantraj • 2016-03-20 15:16

ഉഗ്രൻ. നല്ല വണ്ണം വിസ്തരിച്ചു എഴുതിയിരിക്കുന്നു. നല്ല ചൂടുള്ള സന്ദർഭങ്ങൾ. അമ്മ മകളെ പഠിപ്പിച്ചു കൊടുക്കുന്ന സന്ദര്ഭം കുറച്ചു കൂടി ആവാമായിരുന്നു. ഇനിയും ഇതുപോലെയുള്ള കഥകൾ പ്രതീക്ഷിക്കുന്നു.

sj • 2015-09-22 20:01

4th 5th part not interesting
I waiting next part 
god bless you bro

amal • 2015-09-21 00:02

Next venam but 4 5 part polle akaruth nalla veraiti venam

Vinay • 2015-09-20 10:20

Part 1,2,3....superb...
But 4 and 5 kollilla...
Ella kamikadhakelm pole ayipoyi.
Varriety venam.

prabi • 2015-08-02 17:47

super katha kure part venam pettannu thanne

Saru • 2015-07-31 07:08

Nxt Katha petenuvenam

prabinksree • 2015-08-02 17:49

super katha ithu pole vere undo

Prajithkrishnan S K • 2015-07-30 20:54

@Kambi Kuttan "Indira" Next Part udane Varumo?

jimbroo • 2015-07-30 13:43

Nallaann
Supperb..

AMAL • 2015-07-17 11:38

im waiting for next part.

aji • 2015-07-15 10:55

Evida saranye

rahul • 2015-07-15 10:46

Saranye evida eppol entha ethil kanunnillallo

saranya • 2015-07-15 10:36

Haiiii

rahul • 2015-07-15 10:48

Saranye come

aji • 2015-07-15 10:50

Saranya evida

xxnx • 2015-07-11 18:25

rethyveedu adutha Bhagat venam

b k • 2015-07-09 22:23

kidu story bakki vegam venam muthe

shamee • 2015-07-09 16:16

Orupadu novel pakuthiku vechu nirthittundu intresting ayittullathu ennal oru interstum ilatha kure enam chavru pole post cheyunnu

shamee • 2015-07-09 16:14

Please writer ningalku ariyumo aridha mansoorinte 3rd part ente kadha 3 ariyumenkil post cheyu please

Vinay • 2015-07-02 12:07

Nalla Kadha...
Nalla Avatharan...
....Lissy is Superb...
.....pls post Nxt part.....
.....waiting

b k • 2015-07-02 10:10

ithe ezhuthiya alude name vechu illa adutha part name vekkanam ithu supperrrrr story ane enthu rasam ane ithe bayichu irikan njan kanda pradhana mattam e kadha yil  ore alekar alla sex cheyine othiri kadha patharam vanapol vayikan nalla nalla rasam thudarenum ezhuthanam bakki