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Aadhya bhaagam vaayichu kayyil pidichu pidichu maduthu.
Ambiliyum Vinayanum koode avalude ammayodu kaaryam parayatte. Ennittu kalyaanam vegam nadathanam. Pinne onnum olichu vekkaathe kaliyodu kali. Angine Ambiliyude kazhappinu oru shamanam kittatte.
Hay, Adam. Maasam 7 kazhinjallo.
Adutha bhaagam ezhuthunnille ?
Atho ezhuthu nirthi sthalam vitto ?
Adam ezhuthu nirthiyo. ?
Engil aarengilum ee kathayude baakki ezhuthaamo ?
Adam, vegam ezhuthoo adutha bhaagam.
Vinayan Ambili-ye panni panni garbhini aakkatte. Avasaanam Vinayan Ambili-ye kalyaanam kazhikkanam.
Udan upload cheyyoo. Enikku vallaathe aakunnu.
Hope Adam is not like those writers who disappear after finishing one or two parts, leaving the readers waiting endlessly.
I found the first part extremely sexy. But even after six months the next part is not coming.
Mayiran pakuthi vazhikku vittu poyee.
Ithenthaa Adam ?
Aaru maasam aayittum adutha bhaagam evide ?
Ee kathayil Ambili-ye oru kazhappu mootha 31 kaari aayittaanu kaanikkunnathu. Ennittum Vinayan-um aayi verum randu kalikal maathram !
Albhutham thanne. Avar randu perum ellaa reethikalil-um bandhappedunnathu vivarichu ezhuthanam.
Adutha bhaagam, kooduthal page-kal sahitham, udan variate.
Adam , adutha part upload cheyyoo.
Adam vaayanakkaarude abhipraayangalodu prathikarikkunnilla.
Athukondu aarengilum ee kadha-yude baakki bhaagam vegam ezhuthoo.
Aake randu kalikal maathram aano Vinayan Ambiliye kalichathu ?
Paavam Ambili kazhappu moothu changu potti chathu pokum.
Ee Adam ethu ...ttil poyee irikkuva ?
Vegam adutha part ezhutheday.
Pathinonnu vayassu kuravulla cherukkan muppathiyonnu vayassulla pennine panni thakarkkunna kadha enikku vallaathe ishtappettu. Pennu sharikkum sughikkunnum undu !
Adam enthaa adutha bhaagam upload cheyyaathathu ?
Ee kadha sharikku vivarichu ezhuthiyaal pathinmadangu aaswaadyakaram aavum. Udaaharanathinu, Vinayan naakkukondum viralukondum Ambiliyude kanthu ikkili peduthunnathum, kunna pooril kerumbol avalude prathikaranangulum, pooril ninnum sravangal cheettunnathum,
Vinayan choodulla shuklam poorilekku cheettikkumbol Ambili kaamarasathil parisaram marannu kooki vilikkunnathum, Ambili aaswathichu Vinayan-te kunna chappi shuklam muzhuvan kudikkunnathum. Ithellaam manassil kaanumbol thanne ente pooril ninnum ozhuki panty-yum paavaadayum nananju kuthirunnu
Adam, adutha part ennu varum ?
Enthengilum marupadi tharille ?
Kurachu koode vivaranam aavashyamundu. Udhaharanathinu,
pannumbozhum pannikkazhinjittum Ambili-yum Vinayan-um thammilulla kaama sallaapangal, vyathastha reethikalil ulla sambhogam, Vinayan pannithakarkumbol Ambili undaakkunna seelkaara shabdangal, ellaam kambi adippikkunna reethiyil vivarikkanam.
What I find tickling is the bold and mature way young Vinayan subdued Ambili. And how the sex-starved Ambili almost spontaneously surrendered her body and mind to him, completely and unconditionally.
As the story progresses Ambili becomes pregnant and they decide to marry in spite of their age difference. They become man and wife, with or without the consent of their parents. Let them enjoy wonderful sex.
I find the idea of Ambili getting fucked in style by Vinayan who is eleven years younger, very sexy and tickling.
Waiting eagerly for the next part.
Ee apoorva sundara kadha-yude adutha bhaagam udane upload cheyyoo Adam, please.
Enthinaanu veruthe enneyum mattu aaswaathakareyum niraasha peduthunnathu ?
Valare nannaayittundu.
Pakshe Vinayan Ambili-ye pannunnathum avar thammilulla dialogues-um nannaayee vivarichu ezhuthanam.
I find the idea of Ambili being fucked in style by Vinayan who is eleven years younger, very sexy and tickling.
Adutha part -nu. akshamaraayi kaathirikkunnu. Adam, please post it immediately.
Vinayan Ambili-ye vividha reethikalil panni sughikkunnathu / sughippikkunnathu vivarichu varnikkanam. Vinayante kunna Ambili vaayil eduthu chappi paal muzhuvan kudichirakkunnathum varnikkanam,please.
Adutha part ennu varum, Adam ?
Kaathirikkunnu.
Pannunna rangangal nannaayi vivarichu ezhuthanam, please.
Very good!
Ambili's and Vinayan's emotions have been tastefully described.
But the sex scenes should be much more vividly portrayed so as to enable the readers to visualize and savour the beauty of it all.
Gyan is right.
Everything should be more detailed - how Vinayan's huge penis penetrates Ambili's tight vagina, the pain experienced by her as the full sized eight inch thing goes in, the howls of unimaginable pleasure coming out of Ambili's mouth.
One more thing. As Vinayan and Ambili are now in love, and they have started enjoying regular sex, it sounds odd when he calls her 'chechi' . He should address her 'Edi' , 'nee'.
He should fuck her in all possible positions, including oral sex.
Good one. Please continue.
Ezhuthu nirthiyo, Adam ?