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Kannan.P • 2016-11-09 09:48

Sajan adipoliyayi...... Nammade bangali pennine koodepokunnenu munne kalikan pattuvo

Kannan.P • 2016-11-06 00:33

Nte masheee ningalu oru sambhavamanu,kidu story.

Kuttus • 2016-11-03 19:25

Adipoli ....Continue Dear

thomas • 2016-11-02 21:17

nice..................

vijayakumar • 2016-11-02 19:41

super sajan super. kalakkunnundu katto. angana abhiramiyuda sealum pottichu midukkan. eni adutha tharottam anganannu ariyan kathirikkunnu Saja..

Jassi • 2016-11-02 00:00

Good part.waiting next part

Jansy • 2016-11-01 18:43

Kollllam thakarppanaavunnunduttk

Jassi • 2016-10-31 21:28

Good story

vijayakumar • 2016-10-30 15:43

good story. ,super avatharanam.keep it up and continue dear Sajan...

mumthaz • 2016-10-30 12:38

Good story

jsp • 2016-10-30 10:28

Dear writer, Can you please write little more pages. U can’t write 2-3 pages. Bcz we are expecting more. So plz write at least 8 pages.itz a request

Subi sudha • 2016-10-30 02:07

Good story

thomas • 2016-10-29 22:02

nice..............

sreekmar • 2016-10-29 18:37

Adipoli

sreenandh • 2016-10-29 17:22

Nice part

bashi • 2016-10-29 16:26

കിടു... പക്ഷെ പേജ് വളരെ കുറഞ്ഞുപോയല്ലോ...add more pages....