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adipoli...adutha vedi pettenu pottik
Good one
Thnxs all adutha part kooduthal intresting aaanu
Good story jubi. Nyz opening. Gud work, plz continue
starting alle kollam kuzhapamilla .next part interest akkiyal mathi
Good story, keep it up and continue nalla pramayam, nalla avatharanam.oru reality feel chayunnundu katto.adutha bhagampattannu post chayana.
Enikum kadha ezhuthanamnund.. malayalm type cheyyanaa menakeedu... nokatee. Ithokke vaayikumbo namude ormakalum podi thatti edukan thonunu..
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ഉണ്ട്..
Dr shashi njan oru story submitt cheythu ithuvareyum ithil vannilla time edKkumo
Sathesh Enna name il oru storyum vannu kidappillallo mashe entha storyde name?
ഇജ്ജു തകർത്തു ......
nice opening
Thudakkam kuzappamilla
Nalla thudakkam
Baki bagangal ifu pole thanne intrating ayi thudaratte
കൊള്ളാം നല്ല തുടക്കം, ഒരു റിയാലിറ്റി ഫീൽ കിട്ടുന്നുണ്ട്, അതാണ് വേണ്ടതും. ഇതുപോലെ സുഖിപ്പിച്ചങ്ങു പോയാൽ മതി.....
Adutha part udan varunnund
Nalla kambikathakalkku waitcheyyunnu
OKE GOOD STORY KEEP IT UP
PLS NEED ANOTHER PART,,,
Ithu 3 page ubdayurunnu..
Super thudakkam...
Kooduthal sambhashanangal okke cherthu wishadamayi ezhuthu..
Baaki bhagangalkayi kaathirikunnu
Onnu vegam pottikuo adutha vedii..
soooperrrrrrr