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ഒരു അടുക്കും ചിട്ടയും വരുത്തി എഴുതാന് ശ്രമിക്കു. കഥ നല്ലതാണ്
Good story. gppd theme. adutha bhagayhinayee kathirikkunnu/ please continue dear,
Pratheekshayode thanneya kaathirikunnathu uden thanne publish cheyooo
Next part will be published soon.Hope you like the dominant grandma take control.If you have any suggestions,don't forget to comment.The following parts will contain the real action.Consider this one as the intro for a wild ride.
Next part please
Super story
please countiuse this story
nice
orj kali polum ..ellallo.... bhakhi part ide....
Suppar kunnaya Patti kurachu kuda kaliyakkamayirunnu ammummakku
Good one, ammooma ye patti adhymayi vayikkuyanu nalla ezhuthu veghm next part iduka
Kashtam kashtam
randam bhagam submit cheythittund...abhiprayangal parayuka!