Comments · വീട് ഒരു കളി കൂട് 2 [Varun Rocky]

Sujit • 13-07-2024 11:42

Super 👍

Roy • 26-12-2020 11:47

Super ayittundu first part illa ...next part venam

bi • 21-09-2017 21:16

ടോണി യുടെ ഹോസ്റ്റൽ കഥകൾ വേണം bro

Suhara • 13-09-2017 00:52

ഇതൃയുഠ വെന്‍ടയിരൂനു

V.R • 13-09-2017 01:47

Wasn't theme well?

Darklord • 13-09-2017 08:41

Specificity in the comments will give more value adding to the author

Geethu • 12-09-2017 21:15

Not good

V.R • 13-09-2017 01:45

theme aano writing pattern aano moshamayathu ??

Darklord • 13-09-2017 08:42

Specificity in the comments will give more value adding to the author

Raihaan • 12-09-2017 18:12

Excellent bro.... next story should be like this only....

kaneesh • 12-09-2017 14:11

super bro. aduthathu ithupolullathu eyuthu

Vijayakumar • 12-09-2017 12:07

Supur..ö

Subeena • 12-09-2017 11:00

Super

Darklord • 12-09-2017 10:35

i have ready all ur stories...as i like lncest with f3tish...but now it seems your stories are predictable..less drama more actions in it. your old stories had that drama feeling such Vediyude koodeyulla yatra or Seenthinde Veedu...bring that feel into the stories...But your story is what i like to read most...keep coming., just thought of giving honest feedback...

varun rocky • 12-09-2017 10:55

Thanks ... i lov to hear such kind of honest feedback so i can improve in next one.. Before i had enough time to write elaborately nw running short of time due to some personal reason. However i will keep your suggestion in mind... Thanks again

Darklord • 13-09-2017 08:40

your rush is evident in the story...ideally your old stories goes up to 7-8 episodes but this one was quick..but i felt like this because i have read all your stories...but for new people this would be really good who like mild fetish....

thamashakaran • 12-09-2017 10:25

Superb bro.veendum kadhyumayi varuka
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