0%

The author would appreciate your feedback.

Log in to rate this story.

💬 Comments

View all comments

Loading comment form...

sooraj • 2017-02-20 16:51

Nice.. sherikum ulla oru fantasy aanu ee kadhayil paranjathu.. but kurachu fast aayi poyi. Best friends undayitundu.. ingane sisterne pole thonnunnavarum.. but athu express cheythaal relation break aaville enna pedi kaaranam ipozhum fantasy aayi thudarunnu.. thanks for the story.

aanand • 2017-01-25 16:43

എനിക്ക് ഇത്തരം അനുഭവം കിട്ടാറുണ്ട്.. കഥാകാരനെ പുച്ഛിക്കാതെ

aashaan • 2017-01-25 00:41

Poyi vere valla paniyum nokkedaa .. ... Ee site nte nilavaram kalyathe.. .. Orettanum aniyathiyum.. ...

ettan • 2017-02-06 23:37

Onju poyeda... Nilavaaramolla kore kadhakalu varanindalloo... iyyalu athu vayicha mathi

nichu • 2017-01-23 17:37

Supr

benzY • 2017-01-23 00:25

ഉസാർ

Jeevan • 2020-06-29 22:49

Oru Kali vanno

vijayakumar • 2017-01-22 22:48

superrr . good avathatharanam, variety theme please continue dear yatten...

joby • 2017-01-22 21:59

Nadakuo iganokke

ശിക്കാരി ശംഭു • 2017-01-22 13:56

Best ഏട്ടൻ :-)

Anish • 2017-01-22 13:55

Super..... adipoli.......